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even the saddest things won't by ~musicsadyingart:iconmusicsadyingart:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Human Nature > Open


has it been so long
how could i have forgotten
it's killing me
not long now

just one wish
a wish for sleep
nothing more
but it's filling me
where's my mind
why can't i breathe

fall down
and get up
you'll see
someday soon

i'm already dead
that explains why
i hadn't noticed
when did it become so difficult

the trees have had their say

where's my mind
has it gone with the season
another hand falls
a moment in reflection

there is beauty in the pain
has it been so long
i really have forgotten
©2005-2009 ~musicsadyingart
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~mystiphied Jul 10, 2005, 6:54:56 PM
i like this. rather fragmented, but evoking an emotion quite well.

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he's YOUR god, they are YOUR rules...YOU burn in hell!
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~musicsadyingart Jul 10, 2005, 11:17:24 PM
yeah, my mind was all over the place during this one. although i still feel i got my point across. emotion was the basis as is the pattern with my other works.

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She says that I am the brightest little firefly in her jar
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!studentsolitude Jul 27, 2005, 6:37:34 PM
Goregous poem, honey.

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"What are you saying?"
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~musicsadyingart Jul 28, 2005, 7:08:35 PM
thank you. that means so much tome coming from you. you're work never fails to inspire me. :-)

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She says that I am the brightest little firefly in her jar
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!studentsolitude Jul 28, 2005, 10:14:48 PM
Oh, that's so sweet. My work lately, it hasn't been worth showing anyone. I feel so overly inspired that I can't write anything that seems good enough. Too many highs and lows, I need to stay a day a least on one melancholy level.

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"How do you always find the best way to compromise?"
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~musicsadyingart Jul 29, 2005, 11:29:49 AM
ha, i understand that. i just wrecked my car so maybe i can use that to my writing advantage. thanks for being so supportive of me.

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She says that I am the brightest little firefly in her jar
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!studentsolitude Jul 31, 2005, 2:37:49 AM
Bad luck on your car, I hope it inspires some more for me to read.

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"Where the time is gone..."
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~musicsadyingart Sep 10, 2005, 1:05:10 PM
<3s back

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She says that I am the brightest little firefly in her jar
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